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Post by Sorrows on Jan 9, 2006 4:35:21 GMT -8
I'll leave the previous poems in the Writings of Time thread and post the new ones here to appease the Admins. Respond if you'd like to comment on them, or read them, or ignore this if you want, doesn't bother me, I just need somewhere to put them, get them out there.
Walk
Walk with a bounce, Walk with a smile, Live for yourself, Sing all the while. Your voice gives strength, To you and your friends, Your place is here, Until the very end.
You brighten the day, Even though you don’t know, And when we don’t see you, We worry and miss you so. So don’t think that you’re alone, That your presence isn’t strong, You have friends that care for you, Loved ones here with you all along.
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Worth
The sun rises behind the clouds, The strong rain falls like tears, The smell of the grass and trees, The smile takes away your fears.
You live life knowing it’s hard, But these things give it worth. Give you reason to seize the day, Reason to walk the Earth.
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Post by Dark Beauty on Jan 9, 2006 10:36:13 GMT -8
I like the first one, Sorrows. It is happy!
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Post by 7john7 on Jan 9, 2006 15:53:00 GMT -8
Yes... Hooray for the happy poems!
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Post by Raiku on Jan 10, 2006 13:36:08 GMT -8
I really like the second one. I like the details in the first part.
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Post by Sorrows on Jan 10, 2006 15:25:00 GMT -8
Severe
Live life severe, Forget about your fear, Fight every day, To do things your way. Don't give in, Nothing is a sin, If it's true to your heart, A passion from the start. Never accept good, Be amazing as life should, Live life dire, Love with fire, And never wonder what could. Just live it. Severely.
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Post by Sorrows on Jan 10, 2006 15:27:19 GMT -8
Believe
Believe in love, Believe in life, Believe in yourself, Believe in strife. You can't know good, Without knowing hate. But you can believe, In a better fate.
Believe in Strength, Believe in Song, Believe you're right, And never wrong. Live in words, Let your actions show, What you believe, Let the world know. That you live Strong, You live for love, You live for yourself, And nothing is above, What you believe in.
Be True.
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Post by Sorrows on Jan 12, 2006 18:08:43 GMT -8
Strong
What it means to be strong. To stand with the tide. To face it head on. To embrace what's inside.
I've strength to be, Strength to live, Strength to stand, Strength to give Of myself for my friends. Loyal to them, To the last breath, Until the very end.
Love's what makes it hard, It hurts me to try. Eyes so beautiful They make the strong want to cry.
Well, I'm just strong enough To let go of my pain. To Hell with this pride. Let it fall down like rain From my eyes.
Eyes so Beautiful. I want to cry.
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Post by Raiku on Jan 12, 2006 19:42:53 GMT -8
I have a question Sorrows. About Believe, tell me...why? Why should one believe?
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Post by Sorrows on Jan 13, 2006 1:27:31 GMT -8
I lost the answer to that recently. I'll let you know when I find it again.
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Post by Raiku on Jan 13, 2006 6:44:30 GMT -8
Possibly the same reason that I asked the question...
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Post by Zeffa! on Jan 13, 2006 19:40:37 GMT -8
I like the poems personally, they're inspiring. Live life, what doesnt kill you makes you stronger. Things that seem to be unbearable and not worth it will, in the end, be the strongest lesson you'll ever learn, and you'll grow from it. It's your journey to make.
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Post by Sorrows on Jan 19, 2006 17:27:12 GMT -8
Hole
Happiness is fleeting, The smiles never stay. I laugh and play the same, But every time I say That I’m happy for the moment, The moment fades away.
I feel like I should be happy, And I don’t know why I’m not. There’s a hole somewhere inside me, And it takes all the happy that I’ve got.
It takes away my smiles, It takes away my tears, It takes away my motivation, It takes away my fears.
I feel like nothing’s left, And that nothing more can stay. It’s hard to hear you anymore. I can’t understand what you say.
I’ve got to find the hole soon, And find a way to stop the drain. Before I’m empty throughout the day, And I completely become insane. … More than now, anyway.
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Post by Raiku on Jan 19, 2006 18:52:25 GMT -8
I know how you feel, to an extent. There are times when I know I should feel happy (like now) and et, for no apparent reason I am not. But I'm not sad either, or angry. I'm just...bleh. I can cry yes, but often only when I try to. It never really comes naturally. I almost feel cheap whenever I do, because I know that you can not. But I promise you this Sorrows, I will make you happy. Some how, I swear to you, you will be happy.
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Post by Sorrows on Jan 19, 2006 19:01:02 GMT -8
Eh, I'm not a complete Emo. I'm happy sometimes.. Actually, a lot of the time throughout the day I could say I'm happy, it's just that it never seems to stick with me. I dunno, maybe it's just stress or an overload.. Lots of stuff happening right now.
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Post by Sorrows on Jan 21, 2006 16:08:40 GMT -8
Thanks
I walk this way I laugh all day And now I can say That I’m happy again.
I went astray; Lost my way; Walked away From where you are.
Now I see That I have to be True to me And smile again.
The smiles you lend, The times you bend To make me your friend Brought me back.
My smile is back, My soul is intact, And there is no lack Of my thanks to you.
I have to say, In every way, You make my day, Just by being you.
Thanks. For Everything.
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