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Post by Dark Beauty on Apr 11, 2007 9:03:48 GMT -8
I actually quite like the last one. It is true for me... I have many disappointing, confusing dreams.
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Post by Sorrows on Apr 11, 2007 12:57:30 GMT -8
The first I wrote when I saw some clouds approaching with a sheet of rain beneath them, when the sky above me was still bright and clear. The second was a poem about a poem. And the third was after I had woken from a dream that seemed like another reality.
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Post by Thistle on Apr 11, 2007 16:39:58 GMT -8
I liked the Second one. Like Zeph I like rhymes and it was cool.
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Post by Dark Beauty on Apr 14, 2007 16:21:34 GMT -8
I do like that poem as well... I have respect for it, too. Rhyming is so difficult to do and still have it be a good poem. I have a select few of them. All of the other rhyming ones turned out terribly, and I threw them away.
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