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Post by brainsqugee on Jan 2, 2006 18:30:33 GMT -8
Ah yes, Love poems...I love those love poems.
Hey, Shadow. Do you have any loves ones your willing to share? I would like to see what you write about it.
Oh yeah, and there's more to you than hate and darkness. Same with me. You seem like the kind of guy that would step on people if they said something stupid. But your a loving teddy bear on the inside. Were so alike you and I...creepy really.
...wait. Did I just write a rant about reassurance? Quick to the bunkers!!!
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Post by Sorrows on Jan 2, 2006 19:49:20 GMT -8
No, you're right, I haven't shown you any uplifting poetry because I haven't had any to write, lately. I'm feeling close to one, though. I predict I may have one to post soon, so I will when I have it. I can't force my poetry, though, like some. I have to be inspired.
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Post by brainsqugee on Jan 2, 2006 20:33:24 GMT -8
Hehe, this reminds me of Moulin Rouge, Hehe...I don't want to elaborate.
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Post by Sorrows on Jan 2, 2006 23:17:12 GMT -8
> >; You know, you have a very vivid imagination, do you know that Chris? You can take the smallest thing and elaborate into it to make the most random thing. Don't ever lose that. ^_~
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Post by deliverance on Jan 3, 2006 1:41:25 GMT -8
I"ll tell you what Thanatos, I'll bring in my love poetry in my newest RP I'll be making. Yes, you may collapse because I will be making one, but it will have no storyline. No point. Nothing, except to bring in characters and do whatever. That is where I will be posting my uplifting poetry and entertaining myself.
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Post by brainsqugee on Jan 3, 2006 13:17:24 GMT -8
Awesome, with no storyline and no point that RP will never die! Mwuhahaha! We have achieved RP immortality...
Thanks Sorrow's. It's funny how I just start ranting about the most insignificant things. I will now create a new thread...Thany's Uplifting Rants!
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Post by Sorrows on Jan 4, 2006 4:42:13 GMT -8
Wrote another:
Purpose
Men search for meaning, A treasure that fades away, A glance is all that’s given, And the answers never stay. The faces in the light are blurred, And the voices speak in rhyme, A language indecipherable, Lost in the void of time.
Purpose is the search, The searcher is the prize. A fire that burns, A love in the beholder’s eyes. A song to one, A voice to another, A smile is life, A passion like no other.
Words can’t say, What actions show. A touch is a poem, An Epic you’ve longed to know. Life is Love, And Love gives life, Your eyes tell truth, And the story of your strife.
I hold you for as long as Time can wait, Horde your Love for Life to face this awful fate. Your breath gives me Life; Faith, when I had none to give. As long as I hold on, I’m strong enough to live Life meaningless.
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Post by deliverance on Jan 4, 2006 11:24:22 GMT -8
+claps+
That was great poetry Sorrows. Written well and with much meaning behind every word. You are indeed getting better at it. Later you'll have to tell me what inspired you to write this one.
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Post by 7john7 on Jan 4, 2006 12:32:46 GMT -8
Thanks Dark... Anyway. Good job Sorrows. That's awesome! The only thing I really didn't get was it seemed you cut yourself short with the ending, " Life Meaningless." In the poem you're saying that "Life is Love" and then you say life is meaningless. I'm a little stumped. Cause, if you're relating life to love, and say one is meaningless, then what does that say about the other? Quote: Horde your love for life to face this awful fate. Your breath gives me life. And at the end. "Life meaningless" I don't mean to sound harsh or over critical. When you're saying your love gives me life, but life is meaningless. It just doesn't sound very promising. I think you're trying to say, life is meaningless compared to your love. But when I read it, it sounds like you don't appreciate the life that love gives you. You just like the feeling. That might just be my perception, but yeah. It's still good though. I really like this part.... Your eyes tell truth, And the story of your strife.
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Post by Sorrows on Jan 4, 2006 13:08:30 GMT -8
That part doesn't make sense maybe because it has a background story.. In short, the last part differs from the first because they don't have their Love, all they can do is hold them.
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Post by brainsqugee on Jan 4, 2006 16:27:04 GMT -8
...Hmm, very nice. Once again I am speechless at you skill as a writer. I think I understand the meaning behind this particular article of literature. (Whoa! Another completely random intellectual sentence. Amazing!) Makes a lot of sense. If you don't keep posting poetry I will step on your feelings with a boot made of emotion piercing nails... (what? lol)
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Post by Sorrows on Jan 4, 2006 17:06:13 GMT -8
Umm. Thanks, Thana? I think.. I'll post em as I write them, as long as they are good.
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Post by Sorrows on Jan 5, 2006 4:55:48 GMT -8
Here's another. Insomnia seems to trigger them. Not my best, I think, but I like it alright:
Rose
In the deep of night, In the dark’s embrace, Sound is stilled, Absent in this peaceful place. The silence is numbing, Even my thoughts are froze, Everything seems so close, Entrancing like the Rose.
The flower promises another day, A sunrise to come, Light’s blessing to stay. It breathes and lives, To show you the way, To a better life, On the path you lay.
So wake up to Sun’s warm smile, Embrace the day, And all the while, Remember what the Rose would say. Live Life Strong, Live for the Light, Live for Love, And Live Life Bright Everyday, In Every Way.
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Post by brainsqugee on Jan 5, 2006 5:50:43 GMT -8
Wow, I like that one the best. Don't know why, but it speaks to me.
That line to be specific.
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Post by 7john7 on Jan 5, 2006 17:44:40 GMT -8
Wow...I actually like that one better. Good job Sorrows.
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