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Post by 7john7 on Jun 13, 2006 17:11:01 GMT -8
OK let me get this straight. Shredding: Form of expression. (( In my case anyway )) IT IS POSSIBLE to shred and it sounding beautiful. If it doesn't, you don't know how to shred. And there is such a thing as wholesome rock. Acoustic Rock: Is for anyone who plays an instrument. It doesn't even have to be rock. But Acoustic is for any musician anywhere. It all starts acoustic. Electric is just something to play around with and have fun. And I have heard a lot of acoustic songs that sound exactly the same. So acoustic is not unique, it's universal. The unique part comes with the skill and talent of the musician. *Zephyr* Dude ... You are so hopeless....lol.
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Post by rikimaru on Jun 13, 2006 18:10:48 GMT -8
*deep breath* Ah nevermind...I won't bother arguing a mute point.
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Post by Dark Beauty on Jun 14, 2006 10:22:09 GMT -8
*Zephyr* Dude ... You are so hopeless....lol. ....Why? He's just about as hopeless as you are. OK, so we're moving back into a subject that has nothing to do with the author's poetry. Time to STOP!
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Post by rikimaru on Jun 15, 2006 7:43:32 GMT -8
-Dancing in the Dark- Shadow around me Shadow above me Shadow drowning my feet The music pulses through my veins My body rocks to the symbiotic beat The music gives my body life Unleashes my creativity My body gives the music shape My fingers create the melody And this night amidst our friends the Shadow We dance though none can see There will always be we three Shadow, Music and Me...something not even death could tear apart For even in the afterlife I'll be Dancing in the Dark
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Post by Dark Beauty on Jun 15, 2006 7:54:34 GMT -8
((RIKI!!! YOUR AVATAR IS WONDERFUL!!!! It makes me VERY happy!))
That is very good, Riki. It sounds a lot like me when I need to dance... I love it.
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Post by rikimaru on Jun 15, 2006 7:54:38 GMT -8
Quien es tan hermosa de tu, mi corazon? Quien tiene la gracia de tu, mi amore? Nunca persones puede tocar tu. Como un estrella, corriendo a la universidad Pero me puedo vertu Con mi amor, para ahora y todo tiempo, me busco a mi Angel... Y no me puede me busco a tu. Aqui conmigo, todo el tiempo!, pero no me ve Ahora...pues si... Esta...para mi. *trans* Who is as beautiful as you, my heart? Who is as graceful as you my love? No person can touch you. Like a star, dashing through the sky But I have seen you With my love, for now and all time, I searched for my Angel And I never thought I'd be looking for you There with me, the whole time!, but I couldn't see But now...well... You are...for me.
I haven't titled this one. Why? Because I don't like it.
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Post by rikimaru on Jun 15, 2006 7:56:43 GMT -8
((RIKI!!! YOUR AVATAR IS WONDERFUL!!!! It makes me VERY happy!)) That is very good, Riki. It sounds a lot like me when I need to dance... I love it. ((Hahaha...I've got a bajillion icons I could use like this)) Yea...I went 'blind dancing'. It was the coolest thing ever. You go to a ball room, get blindfolded and get a partner. Then you divide off to different rooms, no lights, and music just plays. You just dance and dance and dance, not worrying about hitting anyone or anything. I'm going back next week.
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Post by 7john7 on Jun 15, 2006 9:58:56 GMT -8
Oh sounds fun. I love it how you made the ending of Dancing in the Dark. It just flows perfectly. I really like it. *Zephyr as hopeless as me.* Smart comeback. *Exalts Dark*
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Post by Dark Beauty on Jun 17, 2006 17:48:43 GMT -8
((Hahaha...I've got a bajillion icons I could use like this)) quote] I just love Kermit's "yay." That was my favorite part of the Muppet Show... besides the crazy songs, of course.
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Post by rikimaru on Jun 20, 2006 11:08:15 GMT -8
Like the raking of claws along glass The scythe shrieks through the air A tearing A splatter A crimson shower
A moments joy comes to an end And unexpected lie from a once loyal friend The party freeze's as everyone eyes make a pass The crimson flood flowing from the heart of glass
She tries to make amends, attemps to place back the shards of glass Only to drop it once more and shatter in a violent prism splash The light now reflects off the tiny shards A beautiful life, so boldly now marred
And what is the final words, as he lay there dying 'Pay it forward, stay not here crying For tears may have washed the feet of Jesus May have saved the realm of men But those tears didn't mend the wounds Of the cruxified hanging then So pack up the tears and roll up your sleeves You will have to work to repay this debt to me'
With those words she walked away Nothing more was left to say And that day forth she surrendered her life To pay the debt back through toil and strife
The moral of our story, though sad and true Look at what a lie can do a friend once held true The Scythe of Death tells no soul apart For little do you know, your lie is the blade that broke his heart.
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Post by Dark Beauty on Jun 24, 2006 12:18:42 GMT -8
...Wow... that was quite powerful. It gave me shivers. I am sorry if something happened to you like that, dear. We all love you, though...
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Post by 7john7 on Jun 24, 2006 17:15:04 GMT -8
... Nice poem Rikimaru, the ending is very direct. It's pretty good. Keep up the work!
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Post by rikimaru on Jun 27, 2006 18:26:56 GMT -8
Danke, and I'm fine...even a ninja needs to vent every once and a while -.- ^_^;;
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Post by rikimaru on Jul 11, 2006 20:11:09 GMT -8
-The Unknown- They blows come, I am your shield The winds blow, yet I will not yield The rain falls, though none touch you For not a drop will pass me through As a treasure to my heart, I draw my blade Assuring myself this hope...this dream will not fade I remind myself I cannot fail As the enemy begins to assail A loud cry fills the air as I plunge into the dark mass My little treasure, tucked by my heart, as our blades beguin to clash And as the dawn rises over the softly rolling hills I stand alone, my treasure safe, our dreams now free to be fulfilled
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Post by Dark Beauty on Jul 11, 2006 20:37:11 GMT -8
I like that one. You are very good at bringing out emotions. It must be the romantic in you.
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